Six Sentence Story – Edge


There was so much noise everywhere.  Every utterance, every laugh, every cough, every footstep sounded like an explosion.  Her stomach twisted.  She drove and drove and drove until she reached the edge of everything.  She stood outside of her car and wept as she watched the stars.  And finally, it was quiet.

The prompt for the Six Sentence Story  challenge was “trip.”


27 thoughts on “Six Sentence Story – Edge

  1. Very heart wrenching. You can feel the building feelings in her as she drives and is finally able to cry and let them out! Great job.

  2. This is so wonderful. I can’t tell you how many times I want to just get in the car and drive, drive, drive until the stresses of my world dissipate. Well done.

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