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“Who in the world could that be?” Samantha wondered aloud, her face scrunched. She and John had been in the middle of complimenting their daughter, Violet, on the remarkable improvement in her attitude and behavior. She’d gone from a sullen, silent teen hiding away in her room to a delightful kid who practically begged for work to do around the house, particularly yard work, in a matter of weeks. Just that weekend alone she’d pulled all the weeds, helped cut the grass, swept the porches and even cleaned the gutters. John and Samantha had decided she deserved a raise in her allowance. ¬†Their unexpected visitor had interrupted before they could tell her the good news.

Samantha followed John to the door. “Can we help you?” John asked the short, red-faced man on their porch.

“Yes! Teach that daughter of yours some manners! My son tells me she’s been looking in our windows…”

“Now, hang on a second!” John yelled back.

As the men continued to argue, Samantha thought about the family who’d just moved in next door. The handsome son who was about Violet’s age, maybe a year or two older. How Violet’s interest in yard-work had coincided with their arrival.

She heard the familiar sound of Violet’s angry footfalls on the steps, culminating with the loud slam of her bedroom door. It appeared things were back to normal. Samantha sighed. It was nice while it lasted.

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8 comments on “180

  1. The Voice says:

    Cute story. And here I thought only boys would peep. Nicely written, Jenn.

  2. Graham Lawrence says:

    A nice portrayal of teenage behaviour.

  3. mandibelle16 says:

    Haha, that’s funny. Good plan on Violets part, to see the hot boy next door. She could have had her allowance raised I bet had she thought about it and only made a little extra effort and not drawn attention to herself, peeping into the neighbours house lol. Then she could have had her cake and ate it too. Great write Jenn.

  4. Maybe if they had started talking, it would have been better. Great story. Poor Violet.

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