She lived in a mango tree. She awoke to their sweet fragrance every morning, but the aroma turned her stomach. It had taken six months to have her unconventional home built, moving in unnoticed during the night. Her neighbors had come by to introduce themselves, yelling up at her window from the foot of the tree. Including him. With her. She’d ignored them. She was a hermit. A neighborhood nuisance. An unseen weirdo. Parents probably warned their kids not to walk near her house. Or tree. Not that any of that mattered to her.
She peeked through the window shrouded by leaves with her long-lens binoculars and she watched. Him and his perfect little family, their homely-looking little girls, they took after her obviously, cooking dinner together, playing on the beach that was also their backyard. One day she’d reclaim the life that had rightly been hers. Until then, she would watch.
In response to Mondays Finish the Story Challenge
Creepy good story!
Thank you! I love creepy…
Me too. 😀
The parents where right to have their kids avoid her! Good story.
Thanks!
Sounds like a revengeful woman. i hope he can keep his family safe from her
I hope so too! Thanks for stopping by
Pretty creepy! Nice story.
Creepy – biding her time……
Yes she is! Thanks for reading…
Got that eerie feeling… Engrossing read😀
Thank you!
Creepy mystery. What caused her to be this way…is she dangerous or just sick ? Good story.
I think a little of both😆. Thanks for reading
Nicely done Jenn! I was not expecting that ending! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well… ^..^
Thank you!
Oooh, wasn’t expecting that! Kind of a mysterious, revenge twist. I like it 🙂 I just started the Mondays finish the story prompts, and I loved this weeks challenge! “she lived in a mango tree.”
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
I agee. This is really creepy. No wonder people now stay away. She’s totally insane. Well done, Jenn. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks
Baaad things are a happein’ in the future!
Ha! Thanks for reading.