Kayla listened to the sharp, raised voices downstairs and shook her head, climbing higher and higher until she reached the attic. Her siblings had done nothing but argue about her father’s will since the funeral and it was shameful. She was moving away, far from the dysfunction of her family and the disappointing path her life had taken in this dead-end town. The stop at the old family home would be her last. Her father had left her something.
Minutes later, Kayla returned to the van, breathless, loading the large crate into the moving van with her brother’s help.
“What is it?” He asked. She said nothing.
That night, in her new home, Kayla hung her father’s gift on the wall of her attic. The Storm on the Sea of Galilee, the painting stolen from the Gardner museum when she was a girl. She stepped back to take in its beauty, wiping a tear from her eye. She would keep her father’s secret forever.
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers and Story A Day
Oh nice twist Dad was an art thief. I was wondering why she only hung the picture in her attic but I understand. Unique take on the prompt. I enjoyed it 🙂
Thanks!
Great twist, Jenn. I wonder whether anyone else in the family knew their father’s secret or whether it was only Kayla who he revealed the truth to. Nicely done. 🙂
I wondered that too as I was writing it. I like the idea that it was something special between father and daughter alone. Thanks!
Her father must have known that she would keep his secret. I was puzzled to why she would hang the painting in her attic. Now I know! Great story, Jenn!
Yes, I think they were kindred spirits. Thank you!
Oh, imagine that – a private little museum in the attic. Great story 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Attics and secrets go so well together. Love your story here.
Yes, they do! Thanks
the twist was well-put, the story well-written. it’s subtly heartbreaking.
Thanks, I’m glad that came through.
Yes! 🙂 Most welcome!
That’s quite a secret! 🙂
It is indeed! Thanks for reading.
From his attic to hers…..where to next? I guess she can enjoy it by herself…..maybe she will pass it on like he did. Great twist.
Yes, I think she’ll pass it on to the next generation after she has a family. Thanks for reading!
You’re welcome! 🙂
I wonder what purpose it will serve in the attic? Interesting take on it.
I think it’s just a special thing she wants to keep for herself, and to honor her father by keeping his secret. Thanks for reading!