“Take your order,” the gum-popping waitress said impatiently, flipping her curly hair out of her eyes, a slight smile forming on her lips. Her table of young male customers looked at their beautiful server in awe, tongue-tied; they’d been planning to pull one of their classic pranks, dine-n-dash.
“Four waters, please,” said one of the boys, finally regaining his ability to speak. She rolled her eyes but dutifully brought the waters, keeping their glasses filled as she served her other tables over the next few hours. At the end of the night, they pooled their funds and managed to leave her the most generous tip she’d received all evening.
“Come back anytime,” she called after them with a wink as she put the cash in her pocket, thinking she’d splurge and treat herself to a nice dinner on her way home.
The Six Sentence Story prompt this week is Order.
Jennifer Terry 
Foiled bynanpretty face!!
🙂 The downfall of teenage boys everywhere. Thanks for reading!
Planning ahead, did not work for them that time! Life is full of surprises. Great story.
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Well played!
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hey! another diner scene! nicely visual opening lines… proper ending
Thank you!
the flip if the hair works every time! nice perky story!
Hahaha, yes it does! Thanks.
A wonderful six sentence story, setting, mood, characters and plot. Loved it!
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Cute. Happy they stuck to water and tippe her well, even though, they could’ve dined and dashed. Guess it pays to be a pretty waitress 🙂
Ha! Yes, life is good I’m sure. Thanks for reading.