I’m startled awake. There are coarse, raised voices out on the deck. Curious, I climb the stairs and see them, a man and woman, grappling, fighting over an unseen object. The woman loses the struggle and slips over the railing with a chilling wail, a flash of white dropping into an infinite black-blue.
I close my eyes, but prolonged sleep is impossible. She tiptoes through my dreams, leaving crimson footprints wherever she goes.
Someone’s fiddling with the lock. I hear the cabin door creak open, heavy footfalls across the tiny room. The bed is jostled, and I close my eyes more tightly, pretending, praying.
“I know you’re awake.”
For Story a Day
Great story. And how eery…I drafted a short last week about a woman overboard…:0
Scary! We need to stay away from boats for the next year at least 🙂
Thanks!
Uhhh…no. My cruise is booked! 😉
Stay away from the railings! 🙂
Lol!
I love the line that started it all. Great story 🙂
Thank you!
what a scary story Jenn!
I’ve been watching a lot of supernatural these days, and you reminded me of it with this story. Good one though 🙂
Thanks! I wanted to have sort of a weird, dreamlike quality.
Wow! That is chilling – and excellent!
🙂 Thanks!
Wow, this story possesses an almost supernatural element about it the way it’s written. you’ve chosen some amazing phrases, “a flash of white dropping into an infinite black-blue” and “She tiptoes through my dreams, leaving crimson footprints wherever she goes.” They’re beautifully portrayed and your use of color here is spot-on!
Thanks so much! I wanted it to be a little unsettling.
Oh scary!
Creepy! Her cruise experience will be remembered forever and it will not be a good one.Wonderful story.
Scary indeed! Thanks 🙂