Nate took the photo out of his back pocket. It was dog-eared, creased and faded after years of wear and travel, but the images were still stunning. As a boy, he and his father had spent many hours in the library, passing the time, flipping through books about faraway places. This picture, of architectural structures in Singapore called Supertrees, lit up in neon colors like stationary fireworks, had captured his imagination. Unbeknownst to his father, he’d stealthily ripped the photo from the book and slipped it into his pocket.
“Flight 1016 now boarding,” said a feminine voice over the intercom.
Nate grabbed his carry-on and made his way to the gate. Sadly, his dad wouldn’t be able to make this trip. Their challenging way of life had taken its on toll on his health. The last time he saw him, his dad made him swear he would travel for the both of them after he was gone. As Nate handed the agent his ticket, he smiled, happy to have kept his promise.
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What a lovely story.
Thank you!
You’re welcome.
A very good story about the need to explore that can be passed on for generations 🙂
Thank you!
A bittersweet story. Sad that the dad has passed away but happy because he kept his promise to his dad to continue exploring. Lovely story! Well done!
Thank you! I figured it would be too sappy if I gave them too much of a happy ending.
LOL! I personally don’t think so. 😀
Wonderful story! 🙂
Thanks!
I like that he followed his dream of travel.
Thanks, I am glad he got to travel too.
You gotta keep a promise like this – great story!
Thank you!
I like how you really get into Nate’s head. The backstory really adds meaning to the piece.
Thanks, I appreciate that.
Wonderful he gets to travel to see these lovely things but sad the Dad is in poor health. Great take on the prompt.
Thanks!
Aww..so sweet story..
Thank you!
Wow that is fascinating. Thanks for the link about the Supertrees, I would love to see them in person. Super story!!
Thanks for reading! Yes, I would love see them too one day. I have a list about a mile long 🙂
Be sure to do at least some of those things on your list!!! 🙂
I’m working on it! 🙂