Bus Stop Cinderella



Kat’s shoe was stuck in the grate.  The sky rumbled above, and it began to rain, a virtual deluge.  The perfect end to a perfect day.  She pulled at her shoe as heavy raindrops pelted her unprotected head; of course she’d forgotten her umbrella.  Completely drenched, she decided to abandon the shoe, limping as quickly as she could to the bus shelter.

“Is this yours?”  She looked up to see Liam, her handsome coworker, holding her battered, wet shoe in his hand.  She nodded.  He knelt and slid the shoe onto her bare foot.

“It fits.”

For Friday Fictioneers!



29 comments on “Bus Stop Cinderella

  1. Solothefirst says:

    Awwww princess? A sweet story

  2. Annie says:

    Perfect ending to the day! I feel happy for her! 🙂

  3. Bus stop Cinderella, was the co-worker to become her Prince Charming?

  4. Yinglan says:

    Aww, what a sweet story with a happy ending. 🙂

  5. Hiba says:

    Haha how sweet. 😀

  6. micklively says:

    Reminds me of the Hollies hit.
    Touching romance.

  7. gravadee says:

    Modern Cinderella, beautiful end

  8. Margaret says:

    Nice. A happy ending, and I’m sure the shoe will fit perfectly, sodden or not.

  9. Archon's Den says:

    Where was the Fairly Odd-Mother? A lovely, feel-good tale. 🙂

  10. Modern day Cinderella! Love it!

  11. I love it, a beautiful Cinderella story. ❤

  12. Dear Jenn,

    Such a sweet story.



  13. A fitting end to a perfect story!

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